小抄本

這裡做小抄本記下一個構思，防止遺忘。
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這是由舞會的想到的寒蟬改版。但人物關係全都變了。包含M2F，F2M，SM，亂倫，百合等雜燴。

姐弟，同高，身材大體相當，關係親密。父親為高級科研人員，常年在研究室，家庭富裕。姐姐大美女，但弟弟一直愛慕姐姐，姐姐也知道，但毕竟是姐弟，更多是亲情上的包容。姐姐高中毕业时期被第一任有钱帅气男友甜言蜜语骗走了第一次，男友炫耀终于上了校花并出国，姐姐无比伤心。大学终于交往一普通不富裕但真诚的男友。弟弟聰明，有靈性，從小善於做膠質面具（舉例兒時姐姐生日做的鬼臉面具嚇壞所有人）中間穿插姐姐和大学男友談情，弟弟暗中偷聽，内心暗暗心恨，发誓姐姐你是属于我的。
0 G: o- I9 E4 X6 ]% a( t& E9 }一日，姐弟談話，討論到姐姐男友，弟說现在男友也只是喜歡姐姐的面貌，身體，和以前那个混蛋一样。姐姐認為他們是真心相愛。弟弟說我會證明給你看。接下來弟弟盜用父親研究成果，結合自己的技術，廢寢忘食研製。終於告訴姐姐可以製作一個仿真人皮，和姐姐打賭他來扮演姐姐，姐姐則扮做弟弟（過程取模，製作等等，而且有父親研究纳米传感技术成果，可以感官完全模擬，中間姐姐變成弟弟，話兒挺起，但未發生關係），男友不會有任何察覺并共處，已證明只是愛姐姐的容貌和身體。。而後二人交换身份，弟弟完美扮演一個性感的姐姐和男友交往，并引诱男友上床，男友未覺任何異樣，并利用男友的真心爱来報復男友，玩起SM女王，男友被调教變成M。（中间插有姐姐以弟弟身份被同班女生表白并半推半就下被女生献身。）。弟弟给姐姐看了男友被SM的情形和床上的录像，姐姐大哭傷心，弟弟安慰，傾訴愛意，说真心爱姐姐只有自己。姐姐拒絕亂倫，弟弟解釋說自己會以女身，不算亂倫，自己這幾天也喜歡上扮演姐姐，和作為一個女人的感覺，愿意做妹妹，只要能爱着姐姐。通过人皮让姐姐绕过乱伦的心理谴责，幫姐姐脫掉人皮，二人百合（或弟弟以女體和姐姐男體發生關係？雙方只摘掉面具？）。二人不分開。後面發展？沒想到。继续交换？後續未知。

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還有一個類美人魚短篇。但我絕不承認是美人魚系列。和最近第一人稱寫法同，“變”的能力在對方手上。（這算第二人稱嗎？我語文不好。）似乎這樣寫法很有诱惑感？至少我感觉，看最近几篇都是。

我回到故鄉小城市，并不是榮歸故里。我是避難回來。我是某黑社會組織的一個普通幹事，我為了發達，巧設計畫，偷出并倒賣了組織的假鈔電板給另一組織。而且做了我爲了保護電板死掉的假象。打撈一筆，現在時享受快樂人生的時候了。（以上交代式速度寫過）
/ C  ]4 e. R: p% ^0 P/ u  ?在這個小城里碰到了以前學校的校花，校花是如此風情萬種，想到自己還是單身，但今時不同往日，我現在很有錢！追求校花。二人開始交往，當夜上床，我把我的秘密勸說了出來，並說我的就是你的。校花轉為男聲，大驚，卻立馬失去知覺。
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一室內，校花脫下面具，脫下全身人皮。是一男子。男子以女聲電話說目標搞定，匯另一半錢。一旁的電腦屏幕上，是我詳細的資料。（這真的不是美人魚，只是個短篇）

以上優先短篇。寫不寫看心情和時間允許。

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順帶給出一老外創意。

, F# e' |, O' z0 lThis story is a dark one, I think it suitable to post on Halloween, anyway
% D- g$ Y) N! }# m# l9 M* l) HI just come up with it and didn't want to lost or forget it so I share
it with you.

) W4 @- m: E; v# o2 SI was thinking, maybe those of us with good story writing
1 ?& V4 |7 o; zskills amongst us, could flesh my idea into full bodysuit story.
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Story idea:
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There is an evil demon among us, it is a male demon blending in
human society for hundreds year. It feed by draining life force from
% p/ g7 o" c$ S5 u+ U  s4 {human male through sex, by doing this it has to disguise itself as a
woman. It can't transform itself into a woman directly but it can
shift its body to simulate woman shape body, it only need a skin to
cover its hellish and ugly body.

4 w  f) H- C0 G) EIt hypnotize a woman and have sex with her, when it climax it
ejaculate its demon semen into a woman's body, the semen is very hot
3 b  _6 r: |. _+ f; zand acid it melt a woman's body both muscle,organ fat and bones from
inside so a woman die terribly living only the skin and hair of a
3 L5 X% f( D/ f6 T, xwoman. Then it put on the skin of an ill fate woman and disguise as
5 y1 @+ L& p& k& t+ Uits victim, shifting its body part underneath dead woman's skin such
! q2 `( K) G2 g  a) x  b: }as reduce height, weight, change eye color from blood red to nomal
human eye, its canine teeth fall out and grow a new set of human white
teeth, forming breasts, narrow waist, wide hip, change its voice so it
% h3 _! G) t1 n' Blook exactly like a woman before she die. It like to study a woman
" A# `$ ]9 j, t3 I4 |before it impersonate her,learn how she talk, walk and when its
disguise as her it even smell and taste like her, so nobody even her
lover can't tell the difference. So its easy target was men that have
( @' i- e5 d, B; `girlfriend or wife.
It like to collect women skin and took skins back to its lair, it can
3 E# ^' D6 @0 e: Ahave sex with a woman while its disguise as another woman by pull its
penis out of the skin vagina, melt her and have another skin suit
while didn't came out of first suit.

Then it hunt for a man life force, it can produce a pheromone to
6 u6 V4 D5 U: I3 M6 Z5 \attract men. It have sex with unsuspected man once a man came it
collect a man semen to produce acid semen in the future and also drain
its victim life force energy so he die. It cause police report of
+ x* m% K7 C2 E/ I% D  }* bmystery missing girls and dead men body found everyday, autopsy reveal
2 l4 Q' Z; I$ S/ Othat they die because heart attack.
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The story should told through perspective of our hero, the demon
: v) t" l+ v5 w4 E0 v1 W  g- phunter. He have a very haunting experience when he was young. One day
he came from school early and heard the sound of moaning from his
parent bedroom, he look through door knob to saw that his father was
having sex with his mother but when they both climax he saw horror
  \9 N3 t3 |9 i5 }; e' |7 n  `scene of his life, he heard very loud roar came out from his mother
& T9 n' g0 M3 Z% W* flip somewhat like a lion but it more deeper that he never heard it
2 G% E9 }* y. c* _+ {. W7 j2 ?before. He saw that his father also realize this from horror in his
eye and suddenly there a light from his father going through his
mother, his father body then became very thin and pale like skeleton.
His mother then laugh evilly and clime off and getting dress, when she
saw him she look at him lustfully and say "You are too young, but we
will meet again!" he never saw his mother look at him like that. She
1 I' Y8 n' y( q/ H( R9 N- p7 K8 lgrin lick her lip fondle her breasts and walk off the house, he really
( D/ V, T* O; l" S; Sfeel scare and arouse but then he realized that his father is in
. I! r0 X# x* b! r1 w) q' etrouble he run too see his father, he was dying and told him before he
die to locate an important book in basement. After the funeral he goes
5 u6 {' A+ ^" V: h) S7 y0 n8 eto look for it and saw that it was an ancient book about the male
; U  Y; }! j( _! Tdemon that drains life force from human male by disguise as a woman,
3 d9 a  H1 j" f1 ~1 M. i( the knew that in that day he didn't saw his mother but the demon
& m" D& U6 c7 H$ kdisguise as her, he loss both of his parent and also learned that his
' r9 c- n+ w* w4 A  {family was the demon hunter family passing the duty from father to son
: u* {! {( |$ p/ j5 X1 Hsince his great great grandfather but they fail to hunt this demon
because it is very smart and also have hypnotize power, for hundreds
year it know art of feminine seduction.

, s1 e1 c' M) \5 l8 u6 w, LSo now many years pass he and his younger sister living with his
aunt(younger sister of mom) he study in university and he vows
- _# u6 D& U; d' urevenge for his parent by hunting this demon down from evidence such
) ?5 ?+ w6 w! ^( p: a" i! Fas unidentified dead body of naked men some shed skin of women like in
5 I" Q. x8 i' A- W" i! G3 }/ Amystery stories. He know that the demon can't living in sunlight it
% j  k  P% r+ t4 ?8 h$ a! a+ Z9 uwill die shortly so it use women skin to cover its own body, but how
/ F( m* K% l0 R9 g3 Acan he locate the demon it can be anybody(any female). The demon also
know that the demon hunter's life force is greater than ordinary
human, if it drain the demon hunter's life force it will be much
stronger. It had drained his father so it was more stronger in pass 10
years but now it feel that its power was diminishing so it also
looking and hunt for him for more power.

! e5 }+ d6 S; x3 Y' j! zSo he have to hunt this demon while also have to protect his
# Z% @4 t. Z) a$ v2 a# o! ^sister and his aunt that is his only relative left and he also have to
protect his beloved beautiful girlfriend from the demon.

" {8 o+ t9 Z# `. P; D1 eWho will be the hunter who will be prey. This is the idea of this story
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I think this is horror/mystery story.
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I see that the demon have more advantages than him so I think the book
0 S6 t; r9 O' [1 C4 g# Q, O$ `should provide methods more than sunlight(It have to expose in its
/ B2 ?: o0 Z, Goriginal body) to kill the demon such as silver bullet or holy water
or...........(your ideas).
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4 ]2 Y; G4 h8 Z/ S$ p' a2 ~9 qThe demon can't be detect easily it can became anyone and very
! ]3 L; A% Y% X# Bdangerous, what if he have six sense or hi-tech tool such as demon
/ m4 `% T( [. P9 m1 T1 L3 P, Cdetector or something .....(your idea) so it can detect who is the
demon easier.
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: J# {( ~. b: p: [2 v" t/ W* F# N: PI also think of possible ending:

+ k  w$ e2 |9 f& w( Y1. He track down the demon to its liar and kill it successfully.

2. He track down the demon to its liar but it escaped (sequel?)
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3. He have been tricked the demon disguise as his girlfriend (his
  Q  n1 ]) N* ?3 Q3 Xgirlfriend had die already to became a suit) and have sex with him and
1 C1 S9 R, x: K) W: B4 Nhe die, the demon win.
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4. The demon disguise as his girlfriend but he know and kill it.

5. The demon disguise as his sister? Did he can kill it or fail?
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0 t# H0 ~6 t! N/ p0 a4 z- j1 b6. The demon disguise as his aunt? Did he can kill it or fail?

7. The demon hypnotize his sister to have sex with him, he think that
0 ]! L# N7 s! R# ^- k0 yshe was the demon so he kill her while the demon is disguising as his
! |4 B) r+ j% U; T! _girlfriend!. After the funeral he was very sad, it pretend to
comfort him and have sex with him so he die, the demon win.
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8. His mother came back to him she say that his father hate her and
1 w! v# ~) h: N$ bthey divorce, she was living far away across country and she came to
2 a1 \' Y1 l9 v, _, ~look for forgiveness from him and say that his father hate her even
" g; ]  O; G( X5 o8 n7 Z  a, V2 @before he die he make up all story about the demon. But he already
seen horror in the past before his father die, his mother is saying
8 C8 W9 t+ H! \8 N/ O  H) d& b; Jthe truth or she was the demon in disguise?

3 ?' D/ G* k. k# y8 ~  H& D& {  L9. His beloved girlfriend is the demon in disguise since beginning,
the woman that he date and falling in love isn't what she seem, the
demon plan this all along. It have sex with him and he die, the demon win.
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10. Your idea…
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sorry for my English, I am not English speaker.
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0 O! H3 S/ F- O& S2 @8 J3 XIf any of you interested in my story idea and want to write it
" F8 @( I3 v4 r  e% C: r# ]please e-mail me

55665，有征文诶，翻译个短篇？
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话说皮物文都这样...变身过程什么的都好，皮物变完以后都不知道要干什么...我那游戏也是这样...

支持～第一篇我很有兴趣

其实变完了干什么完全取决于作者，看作者有没有构思结局。
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/ j2 k' V- r' D8 }第一个构思不能算没有结局，姐姐对男人失望，弟弟通过人皮让姐姐绕过乱伦的心理谴责，只要能爱着姐姐，发展为美好的姐妹关系。也可算结局。只是一个被调教的男友，还有姐弟交换身份都是不错的题材，结束了就可惜了。但即便如此，写完第一部分构思起码10章节以上，20左右也有可能。最后把结局写的模糊些，等有新的构思就可接上去。写绝也无所谓，反正我也懒人。
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( R' Q; c0 w% e( u小说要有发展必须有事件冲突（依稀记得好像以前老师说过），具体我也说不清楚，反正就是作者得有构思去写吧，可能你看日文小说多了些，我个人感觉日文短篇多，没有更多交代，英文的长篇大作可是很多的。
至于翻译，我英文也不咋的，大学时期勉强以多1分过的四级，翻译很吃力。翻译的时间大大大于写作的时间。主要也没心情，所以只有摊手。

其实变完了干什么完全取决于作者，看作者有没有构思结局。
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第一个构思不能算没有结局，姐姐对男人失望，弟弟通过人皮让姐姐绕过乱伦的心理谴责，只要能爱着姐姐，发展为美好的姐妹关系。也可算结局。只是一个被调教 ...
55665 发表于 2009-5-2 08:17

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第一篇是我喜欢的类型。
没说没有结局，只是现在我烦恼好像人皮穿上了以后没啥事情好做好发展，世界征服？

& H& p2 h/ t* P* s2 [1 v话说国内目前曾经最大的TS站也就是紫云了？

在TGGAME搞推荐不就是TGGAME备份站么，那本站不是一点意义都没有了。难得有个这么不错的平台，当然要好好发展一下。

  k+ X5 S+ J  M2 l$ f/ m" p9 B' Q0 zKIG123那边不是也有些人才吗...我想说最起码人数先上去了才是吧
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! G2 ?4 N; @& Z$ P2 W* X, s今天俺出去玩啦，论坛交给你照顾啦

没啥事好发展就创造事件嘛。不然哪来的故事。
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4 `4 F" _% ^9 Y& X& x" A; |其实这种论坛真不需要发展为怎样怎样的人气，人多会杂，而且这不是社会意识上认同的。

設定有點複雜哩!
這樣是否會變得太龐大呢? 到時會不會爛尾?

有意思的素材，顺便提升一下英语水平

那个类美人鱼好像只有一个标题。

reddit上还是有很多这种短片创意的

厉害，各种类型的都有啊

楼主第一篇创意很不错

两篇文章都不错期待楼主的文章

这个思路还挺不错的，有类似文吗

不错不错，楼主加油写出来吧

第一篇略有老套了，结局需要想一下，他们到底想干嘛。。