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這裡做小抄本記下一個構思，防止遺忘。+ y# r+ e4 |9 W1 T0 \
, F3 r8 k7 W* ?. v0 c: z+ Z這是由舞會的想到的寒蟬改版。但人物關係全都變了。包含M2F，F2M，SM，亂倫，百合等雜燴。* X0 s! n, M' c' ]" f+ z: C
; s5 S R, o! z: E姐弟，同高，身材大體相當，關係親密。父親為高級科研人員，常年在研究室，家庭富裕。姐姐大美女，但弟弟一直愛慕姐姐，姐姐也知道，但毕竟是姐弟，更多是亲情上的包容。姐姐高中毕业时期被第一任有钱帅气男友甜言蜜语骗走了第一次，男友炫耀终于上了校花并出国，姐姐无比伤心。大学终于交往一普通不富裕但真诚的男友。弟弟聰明，有靈性，從小善於做膠質面具（舉例兒時姐姐生日做的鬼臉面具嚇壞所有人）中間穿插姐姐和大学男友談情，弟弟暗中偷聽，内心暗暗心恨，发誓姐姐你是属于我的。; }. _/ H: g& e2 q; l8 q( K
一日，姐弟談話，討論到姐姐男友，弟說现在男友也只是喜歡姐姐的面貌，身體，和以前那个混蛋一样。姐姐認為他們是真心相愛。弟弟說我會證明給你看。接下來弟弟盜用父親研究成果，結合自己的技術，廢寢忘食研製。終於告訴姐姐可以製作一個仿真人皮，和姐姐打賭他來扮演姐姐，姐姐則扮做弟弟（過程取模，製作等等，而且有父親研究纳米传感技术成果，可以感官完全模擬，中間姐姐變成弟弟，話兒挺起，但未發生關係），男友不會有任何察覺并共處，已證明只是愛姐姐的容貌和身體。。而後二人交换身份，弟弟完美扮演一個性感的姐姐和男友交往，并引诱男友上床，男友未覺任何異樣，并利用男友的真心爱来報復男友，玩起SM女王，男友被调教變成M。（中间插有姐姐以弟弟身份被同班女生表白并半推半就下被女生献身。）。弟弟给姐姐看了男友被SM的情形和床上的录像，姐姐大哭傷心，弟弟安慰，傾訴愛意，说真心爱姐姐只有自己。姐姐拒絕亂倫，弟弟解釋說自己會以女身，不算亂倫，自己這幾天也喜歡上扮演姐姐，和作為一個女人的感覺，愿意做妹妹，只要能爱着姐姐。通过人皮让姐姐绕过乱伦的心理谴责，幫姐姐脫掉人皮，二人百合（或弟弟以女體和姐姐男體發生關係？雙方只摘掉面具？）。二人不分開。後面發展？沒想到。继续交换？後續未知。
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還有一個類美人魚短篇。但我絕不承認是美人魚系列。和最近第一人稱寫法同，“變”的能力在對方手上。（這算第二人稱嗎？我語文不好。）似乎這樣寫法很有诱惑感？至少我感觉，看最近几篇都是。3 a5 a z9 a; f
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我回到故鄉小城市，并不是榮歸故里。我是避難回來。我是某黑社會組織的一個普通幹事，我為了發達，巧設計畫，偷出并倒賣了組織的假鈔電板給另一組織。而且做了我爲了保護電板死掉的假象。打撈一筆，現在時享受快樂人生的時候了。（以上交代式速度寫過）
. ^9 ]/ f) C3 l; Z在這個小城里碰到了以前學校的校花，校花是如此風情萬種，想到自己還是單身，但今時不同往日，我現在很有錢！追求校花。二人開始交往，當夜上床，我把我的秘密勸說了出來，並說我的就是你的。校花轉為男聲，大驚，卻立馬失去知覺。2 ~0 ~" G/ @* P, {: l& j
5 U1 @9 K" W) w; M- V一室內，校花脫下面具，脫下全身人皮。是一男子。男子以女聲電話說目標搞定，匯另一半錢。一旁的電腦屏幕上，是我詳細的資料。（這真的不是美人魚，只是個短篇）
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以上優先短篇。寫不寫看心情和時間允許。
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順帶給出一老外創意。
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This story is a dark one, I think it suitable to post on Halloween, anyway2 ~3 D/ ?9 L; } n. Y9 n) l- S- Y. Y
I just come up with it and didn't want to lost or forget it so I share8 R5 `' f0 x/ J+ f8 `5 W
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I was thinking, maybe those of us with good story writing
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Story idea:% N9 `& a3 n) }4 S2 P) X" r2 y
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There is an evil demon among us, it is a male demon blending in
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human male through sex, by doing this it has to disguise itself as a" M9 f# K1 a3 B9 C' `
woman. It can't transform itself into a woman directly but it can. S% y! i0 I! u
shift its body to simulate woman shape body, it only need a skin to+ }) ^- a: ~; x3 C+ ~( k; l: L) H0 s
cover its hellish and ugly body.
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It hypnotize a woman and have sex with her, when it climax it
) L7 x# e: J+ G, m5 J9 uejaculate its demon semen into a woman's body, the semen is very hot
/ R( U) z) l6 x7 t( Vand acid it melt a woman's body both muscle,organ fat and bones from
5 c/ |, K# o9 @! S: K( cinside so a woman die terribly living only the skin and hair of a
: @) L! ]) _6 f5 ~& s$ F* zwoman. Then it put on the skin of an ill fate woman and disguise as( {) @1 v" I1 h4 D1 d
its victim, shifting its body part underneath dead woman's skin such ~1 z7 f- ?6 h5 E
as reduce height, weight, change eye color from blood red to nomal
7 f" p4 n& w, Phuman eye, its canine teeth fall out and grow a new set of human white
! K9 `2 D7 t |' i7 Iteeth, forming breasts, narrow waist, wide hip, change its voice so it
; w% ?8 l5 R* n/ P$ y6 e; Blook exactly like a woman before she die. It like to study a woman
9 |- v3 E [3 K1 V5 X/ Lbefore it impersonate her,learn how she talk, walk and when its
+ _" ~& z5 v) ?) ldisguise as her it even smell and taste like her, so nobody even her
5 T* V8 N+ s& Y0 xlover can't tell the difference. So its easy target was men that have$ U8 D$ l! g8 W8 {; H
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It like to collect women skin and took skins back to its lair, it can8 x v3 X/ ^3 d4 A
have sex with a woman while its disguise as another woman by pull its
0 q2 t2 C; z. t2 ^, O! f! h. ~- h8 ]penis out of the skin vagina, melt her and have another skin suit0 Y6 b; o2 j5 T) k
while didn't came out of first suit.
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Then it hunt for a man life force, it can produce a pheromone to
7 u* M+ V/ c) k; b) f1 M+ \2 Xattract men. It have sex with unsuspected man once a man came it
8 ^5 ~& d& u7 rcollect a man semen to produce acid semen in the future and also drain6 L! H5 E: x2 b! p. [1 ]. u
its victim life force energy so he die. It cause police report of
& l2 l. j: R5 u% ~mystery missing girls and dead men body found everyday, autopsy reveal
g H" i, f5 _) F0 m7 m: n% rthat they die because heart attack.
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The story should told through perspective of our hero, the demon
! j. J, v$ \: Q) Mhunter. He have a very haunting experience when he was young. One day
0 @' _7 w/ m# g/ M8 t4 ^; Vhe came from school early and heard the sound of moaning from his
& Q( E( @7 }0 Nparent bedroom, he look through door knob to saw that his father was
( l9 k; j ~- l0 Y3 [" y5 v, Phaving sex with his mother but when they both climax he saw horror
0 ?( @# k* |" kscene of his life, he heard very loud roar came out from his mother3 d9 Q, _" e/ u* ~- z+ l( P
lip somewhat like a lion but it more deeper that he never heard it
2 w) X) I+ Y! x+ U, Tbefore. He saw that his father also realize this from horror in his
/ w7 w5 T* O( T& I6 Veye and suddenly there a light from his father going through his, e; |; ^0 U( p
mother, his father body then became very thin and pale like skeleton.
% B r, Y5 g Y G* J9 H+ d7 nHis mother then laugh evilly and clime off and getting dress, when she9 e& p) C) z) v! l
saw him she look at him lustfully and say "You are too young, but we9 ^5 T! @4 v# m1 f0 p2 Q3 P ^
will meet again!" he never saw his mother look at him like that. She
) L; \3 ~( C$ \) N) U. Lgrin lick her lip fondle her breasts and walk off the house, he really# ^+ C' }; p$ l# O& D; _7 C
feel scare and arouse but then he realized that his father is in
+ ^8 i. e2 X: J/ \5 Qtrouble he run too see his father, he was dying and told him before he
& g/ @$ b7 C1 L; @, ~4 {9 Tdie to locate an important book in basement. After the funeral he goes R8 b/ P' Z" d# z: ]6 M
to look for it and saw that it was an ancient book about the male
6 [: T+ B+ K/ a: b* V9 m3 rdemon that drains life force from human male by disguise as a woman,
4 d7 O' U2 z; R( i" \he knew that in that day he didn't saw his mother but the demon1 ]9 Q3 l" L& [- z
disguise as her, he loss both of his parent and also learned that his) \# _+ y, Z0 G) R5 N
family was the demon hunter family passing the duty from father to son
& I$ }6 t- b8 G: A2 K3 J- ?since his great great grandfather but they fail to hunt this demon" l6 S. D% m- M2 ~
because it is very smart and also have hypnotize power, for hundreds! u1 k) [, Q5 W" N' N7 Y
year it know art of feminine seduction.
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So now many years pass he and his younger sister living with his; C4 y, v8 n2 g
aunt(younger sister of mom) he study in university and he vows0 N4 n& q2 g) u7 y
revenge for his parent by hunting this demon down from evidence such+ ~9 {( O/ w5 \, o
as unidentified dead body of naked men some shed skin of women like in
+ F! _# ]! v/ m6 l4 Fmystery stories. He know that the demon can't living in sunlight it: g1 _. t: n$ g6 L6 K3 g) j' |( h
will die shortly so it use women skin to cover its own body, but how+ w _0 x6 N0 B8 T! Q
can he locate the demon it can be anybody(any female). The demon also
i2 e/ D' L/ I0 J/ a, bknow that the demon hunter's life force is greater than ordinary" y) J) |1 X" r: Y* Z# S% A* B
human, if it drain the demon hunter's life force it will be much
0 `6 F' O3 X& x' \: C0 Nstronger. It had drained his father so it was more stronger in pass 10
; Q& a" a; h1 fyears but now it feel that its power was diminishing so it also
; u7 c" g# ` L% J' T. Plooking and hunt for him for more power.. q1 ?2 P. n2 N. v ~6 G
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sister and his aunt that is his only relative left and he also have to# m) G3 t. C0 D7 V9 q0 P. ?" i
protect his beloved beautiful girlfriend from the demon.
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$ w ^& _( ~& K7 C# x2 V/ pI think this is horror/mystery story.; M% |% d; H7 P1 N
/ v x$ A2 n2 `) w# BI see that the demon have more advantages than him so I think the book
' g; m% i* j: s5 N v2 kshould provide methods more than sunlight(It have to expose in its
: ?2 |1 o& [' i& d5 }; j' j2 [$ `original body) to kill the demon such as silver bullet or holy water
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1 z) k0 h2 T# h$ U( f" G$ AThe demon can't be detect easily it can became anyone and very) j. U5 L" D3 }% n/ `$ Z! f, C9 _0 F
dangerous, what if he have six sense or hi-tech tool such as demon/ `4 {2 z8 d7 e0 {3 i. |
detector or something .....(your idea) so it can detect who is the' h+ ]9 v1 }6 h- Z+ E
demon easier.
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I also think of possible ending:2 d0 w" u/ Z! y7 C$ P$ D0 g9 J! ]
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1. He track down the demon to its liar and kill it successfully.; C" w7 k1 t# e- W
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2. He track down the demon to its liar but it escaped (sequel?)
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+ A' d, a+ i/ C7 V- z ~! s3. He have been tricked the demon disguise as his girlfriend (his
+ @5 i# l! g9 U5 pgirlfriend had die already to became a suit) and have sex with him and
8 C V* {% h/ S: e1 c# m$ _he die, the demon win.
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. F H/ N2 j: T+ P1 U" }3 P* [4. The demon disguise as his girlfriend but he know and kill it.
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5. The demon disguise as his sister? Did he can kill it or fail?
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6. The demon disguise as his aunt? Did he can kill it or fail?
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7. The demon hypnotize his sister to have sex with him, he think that% @) [- b/ g1 }/ Z3 v
she was the demon so he kill her while the demon is disguising as his7 x$ x4 a% A- _9 ^' g0 A4 J8 u& n
girlfriend!. After the funeral he was very sad, it pretend to; |5 E5 d* G* S# O
comfort him and have sex with him so he die, the demon win.
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* g4 v6 J6 @# ^6 E% R6 _9 F8. His mother came back to him she say that his father hate her and: Q$ ^4 h' A' x6 m! @9 x6 {
they divorce, she was living far away across country and she came to1 A4 [# ^: t" ]) S; W) p }
look for forgiveness from him and say that his father hate her even
/ c& T" J. S" Z4 Zbefore he die he make up all story about the demon. But he already: x. T4 g# w, `8 X
seen horror in the past before his father die, his mother is saying
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9. His beloved girlfriend is the demon in disguise since beginning,
% Y! t2 A# d' sthe woman that he date and falling in love isn't what she seem, the
% [( b8 ^7 F( _6 w0 i- J, Z& ^# X8 @demon plan this all along. It have sex with him and he die, the demon win.5 g; }& g2 Q2 B& h8 O* R5 m. s6 q
J' q1 }- C% _$ c$ V' l4 |10. Your idea…
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