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這裡做小抄本記下一個構思，防止遺忘。, [( ?. r& h6 v+ @3 l" C
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這是由舞會的想到的寒蟬改版。但人物關係全都變了。包含M2F，F2M，SM，亂倫，百合等雜燴。
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6 V+ B. m4 I+ w; J. U* F姐弟，同高，身材大體相當，關係親密。父親為高級科研人員，常年在研究室，家庭富裕。姐姐大美女，但弟弟一直愛慕姐姐，姐姐也知道，但毕竟是姐弟，更多是亲情上的包容。姐姐高中毕业时期被第一任有钱帅气男友甜言蜜语骗走了第一次，男友炫耀终于上了校花并出国，姐姐无比伤心。大学终于交往一普通不富裕但真诚的男友。弟弟聰明，有靈性，從小善於做膠質面具（舉例兒時姐姐生日做的鬼臉面具嚇壞所有人）中間穿插姐姐和大学男友談情，弟弟暗中偷聽，内心暗暗心恨，发誓姐姐你是属于我的。# r. f6 _- V7 |; g5 a2 H
一日，姐弟談話，討論到姐姐男友，弟說现在男友也只是喜歡姐姐的面貌，身體，和以前那个混蛋一样。姐姐認為他們是真心相愛。弟弟說我會證明給你看。接下來弟弟盜用父親研究成果，結合自己的技術，廢寢忘食研製。終於告訴姐姐可以製作一個仿真人皮，和姐姐打賭他來扮演姐姐，姐姐則扮做弟弟（過程取模，製作等等，而且有父親研究纳米传感技术成果，可以感官完全模擬，中間姐姐變成弟弟，話兒挺起，但未發生關係），男友不會有任何察覺并共處，已證明只是愛姐姐的容貌和身體。。而後二人交换身份，弟弟完美扮演一個性感的姐姐和男友交往，并引诱男友上床，男友未覺任何異樣，并利用男友的真心爱来報復男友，玩起SM女王，男友被调教變成M。（中间插有姐姐以弟弟身份被同班女生表白并半推半就下被女生献身。）。弟弟给姐姐看了男友被SM的情形和床上的录像，姐姐大哭傷心，弟弟安慰，傾訴愛意，说真心爱姐姐只有自己。姐姐拒絕亂倫，弟弟解釋說自己會以女身，不算亂倫，自己這幾天也喜歡上扮演姐姐，和作為一個女人的感覺，愿意做妹妹，只要能爱着姐姐。通过人皮让姐姐绕过乱伦的心理谴责，幫姐姐脫掉人皮，二人百合（或弟弟以女體和姐姐男體發生關係？雙方只摘掉面具？）。二人不分開。後面發展？沒想到。继续交换？後續未知。
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a/ p# Q: O3 F1 Q& F哎，貌似又偏重邪惡了。
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, P0 N+ ?! J) W/ ?2 S/ ?' ^4 t還有一個類美人魚短篇。但我絕不承認是美人魚系列。和最近第一人稱寫法同，“變”的能力在對方手上。（這算第二人稱嗎？我語文不好。）似乎這樣寫法很有诱惑感？至少我感觉，看最近几篇都是。" l" L5 e# v# V2 t0 k
7 b9 u. v% C0 |, C6 e: F; \我回到故鄉小城市，并不是榮歸故里。我是避難回來。我是某黑社會組織的一個普通幹事，我為了發達，巧設計畫，偷出并倒賣了組織的假鈔電板給另一組織。而且做了我爲了保護電板死掉的假象。打撈一筆，現在時享受快樂人生的時候了。（以上交代式速度寫過）
, g% d/ F7 K' ]- H* S0 R# h在這個小城里碰到了以前學校的校花，校花是如此風情萬種，想到自己還是單身，但今時不同往日，我現在很有錢！追求校花。二人開始交往，當夜上床，我把我的秘密勸說了出來，並說我的就是你的。校花轉為男聲，大驚，卻立馬失去知覺。1 Z8 O, e9 T7 v0 \5 e$ `
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一室內，校花脫下面具，脫下全身人皮。是一男子。男子以女聲電話說目標搞定，匯另一半錢。一旁的電腦屏幕上，是我詳細的資料。（這真的不是美人魚，只是個短篇）
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順帶給出一老外創意。
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4 B+ }; _* H! M# CThis story is a dark one, I think it suitable to post on Halloween, anyway& C1 M2 y" X$ C' Q# R `0 K
I just come up with it and didn't want to lost or forget it so I share
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I was thinking, maybe those of us with good story writing/ }2 a4 f; h, q( F$ B& c2 ]* M
skills amongst us, could flesh my idea into full bodysuit story.
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Story idea:. ~- {* w% O$ p" X5 n5 W
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There is an evil demon among us, it is a male demon blending in m+ d7 S$ r# R9 T6 [
human society for hundreds year. It feed by draining life force from
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woman. It can't transform itself into a woman directly but it can1 U( K: q8 z5 w6 m: K/ ^( k
shift its body to simulate woman shape body, it only need a skin to
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. v3 o8 S, p4 I/ WIt hypnotize a woman and have sex with her, when it climax it
( y% o3 C$ e' K9 [9 B; \3 Aejaculate its demon semen into a woman's body, the semen is very hot: a( a) {" l" t# D, i
and acid it melt a woman's body both muscle,organ fat and bones from
9 a2 g7 U: ]4 S0 B$ Kinside so a woman die terribly living only the skin and hair of a
; u% F: I. b% @1 F; a; V3 P8 lwoman. Then it put on the skin of an ill fate woman and disguise as
; Q4 u! V5 y o# X" J, N1 f; ~its victim, shifting its body part underneath dead woman's skin such
8 ?9 ^$ j: v3 N. Oas reduce height, weight, change eye color from blood red to nomal7 e/ g6 H* Z% T
human eye, its canine teeth fall out and grow a new set of human white0 b4 d/ ~! T0 d1 |
teeth, forming breasts, narrow waist, wide hip, change its voice so it) |. K/ k" `7 @6 k" k
look exactly like a woman before she die. It like to study a woman
2 p/ `9 ?$ j% X2 @before it impersonate her,learn how she talk, walk and when its
V) W; l- w/ V8 i& Z& r1 `disguise as her it even smell and taste like her, so nobody even her
: {" h3 p/ G* G% llover can't tell the difference. So its easy target was men that have
* j x3 A/ n- g/ I d7 xgirlfriend or wife.
4 j, d9 W/ I, C' k; d$ A8 RIt like to collect women skin and took skins back to its lair, it can
( D+ G* ]% d7 ^. a: {/ Ahave sex with a woman while its disguise as another woman by pull its
, a: _/ H+ B5 j' J$ v" h1 ^penis out of the skin vagina, melt her and have another skin suit
: T4 j7 Y5 t" Q2 G9 ]while didn't came out of first suit.
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+ S# L( V9 A) e) @$ T/ nThen it hunt for a man life force, it can produce a pheromone to& C8 w( r+ q6 U+ Q- o% }7 Q
attract men. It have sex with unsuspected man once a man came it
* _4 m! |. |6 Q$ U7 bcollect a man semen to produce acid semen in the future and also drain
, ~) O, W0 I) K" ]. h E) yits victim life force energy so he die. It cause police report of
e+ K7 K. `! }& T; ^mystery missing girls and dead men body found everyday, autopsy reveal
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The story should told through perspective of our hero, the demon
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he came from school early and heard the sound of moaning from his4 A0 R5 g8 G3 R) E' F2 {
parent bedroom, he look through door knob to saw that his father was& e2 e5 @; m6 h& A; f; X# u6 k
having sex with his mother but when they both climax he saw horror4 E7 [! z4 A+ y/ i& K$ O
scene of his life, he heard very loud roar came out from his mother
- Z" [) T$ F- s3 |3 ^lip somewhat like a lion but it more deeper that he never heard it
7 ]4 \8 _$ s& l; _before. He saw that his father also realize this from horror in his/ A' g; _: S) G! U9 H
eye and suddenly there a light from his father going through his
& U2 w( U7 O3 i- amother, his father body then became very thin and pale like skeleton.
4 r: A: \0 ~; M* H6 PHis mother then laugh evilly and clime off and getting dress, when she$ X1 g# x+ N/ ]& r& X3 g0 A
saw him she look at him lustfully and say "You are too young, but we% f: l6 @& K9 n2 Z- k( {
will meet again!" he never saw his mother look at him like that. She
4 A( z8 F4 R" l" n) s; bgrin lick her lip fondle her breasts and walk off the house, he really0 u. u1 w+ o$ V; D, e4 k
feel scare and arouse but then he realized that his father is in
2 D- m, |0 E+ e( ttrouble he run too see his father, he was dying and told him before he
, j9 K4 y R: |: L; \0 e) mdie to locate an important book in basement. After the funeral he goes3 S, K' i, w3 \$ G; {9 B( X
to look for it and saw that it was an ancient book about the male
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he knew that in that day he didn't saw his mother but the demon- O$ y ]0 m U X4 r
disguise as her, he loss both of his parent and also learned that his
: L* G! ]( `1 Q% Tfamily was the demon hunter family passing the duty from father to son
% p: H, ?# J. L1 ] n9 Osince his great great grandfather but they fail to hunt this demon
. V& w& U" A* _" G3 L* _because it is very smart and also have hypnotize power, for hundreds
- C& f1 i% i5 E/ qyear it know art of feminine seduction.; }: `6 ^' X6 o! }" [
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So now many years pass he and his younger sister living with his
; z- m- q8 o8 i) q* ^# o% Paunt(younger sister of mom) he study in university and he vows
1 d0 q$ a; f4 u3 drevenge for his parent by hunting this demon down from evidence such
" q) L2 w2 e- Q- T# g& Kas unidentified dead body of naked men some shed skin of women like in
& b- m! g! x( l! R/ n7 T0 r3 Wmystery stories. He know that the demon can't living in sunlight it H( c* L' K& \. t
will die shortly so it use women skin to cover its own body, but how; U# ?& Q7 x3 v$ S/ v
can he locate the demon it can be anybody(any female). The demon also- e6 V6 g! E. d% {$ T8 Q
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human, if it drain the demon hunter's life force it will be much9 d+ q, @; v6 g2 _
stronger. It had drained his father so it was more stronger in pass 10
/ t8 S S3 {( N8 t4 d) v' qyears but now it feel that its power was diminishing so it also& g8 w" c$ z( Y; ~6 T0 y2 z
looking and hunt for him for more power.* g' H! U3 E: ~, \/ S" f
* L% R7 B" D0 T& \3 r4 ^1 s/ p3 nSo he have to hunt this demon while also have to protect his
; Q/ i, X% \' m+ o3 H' rsister and his aunt that is his only relative left and he also have to
6 W+ C: x6 O$ s; Lprotect his beloved beautiful girlfriend from the demon.
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Who will be the hunter who will be prey. This is the idea of this story& h. ~% ?. G3 x* A1 M
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I think this is horror/mystery story.& \' w5 }: w0 _7 }: G$ m
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I see that the demon have more advantages than him so I think the book& w% U1 G- D' \2 N3 B/ \3 l7 d
should provide methods more than sunlight(It have to expose in its( n6 i2 a; E! N3 x6 X/ s
original body) to kill the demon such as silver bullet or holy water! m4 }2 ~6 u* b
or...........(your ideas).! Q1 H, g6 G" H) {* }: c' a
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The demon can't be detect easily it can became anyone and very5 y) M8 `2 u+ i9 ] a# W
dangerous, what if he have six sense or hi-tech tool such as demon* U7 T; |( s' a* G8 O1 ?
detector or something .....(your idea) so it can detect who is the4 ?7 p# f8 A# a# y9 ~0 h% e3 N- \
demon easier.
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F. S; H3 g$ Z5 S9 [1 |+ wI also think of possible ending:
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% Y4 Z& E# d, L0 I0 s( Z0 ]1. He track down the demon to its liar and kill it successfully.
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6 {3 u. U3 S( g( k2. He track down the demon to its liar but it escaped (sequel?)
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3. He have been tricked the demon disguise as his girlfriend (his6 \: X8 L7 c$ g5 W) f
girlfriend had die already to became a suit) and have sex with him and
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4. The demon disguise as his girlfriend but he know and kill it.
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. y' E4 T J) x1 \8 ^5. The demon disguise as his sister? Did he can kill it or fail?
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5 n1 H' \/ d* R$ |2 j) o& F6 k- n; {6. The demon disguise as his aunt? Did he can kill it or fail?
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' c+ h) O5 C N7 ?- w7 h D' ~1 \7. The demon hypnotize his sister to have sex with him, he think that( {" X2 T ]# s
she was the demon so he kill her while the demon is disguising as his- N! k. w% ~% D# `; J
girlfriend!. After the funeral he was very sad, it pretend to: O5 {; _, ~: S0 s( T4 U
comfort him and have sex with him so he die, the demon win.
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8. His mother came back to him she say that his father hate her and
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look for forgiveness from him and say that his father hate her even! W* [) u) O9 g
before he die he make up all story about the demon. But he already. d: B. h5 H! b5 h/ ^
seen horror in the past before his father die, his mother is saying
& `+ R i" @: V& Q8 }0 Othe truth or she was the demon in disguise?
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" a: z0 }6 C" r6 ]; l E9 I' n$ f! j9. His beloved girlfriend is the demon in disguise since beginning,% V8 F2 q2 }& l: B+ h" n- G2 G' A
the woman that he date and falling in love isn't what she seem, the
4 J# \/ n% Q0 i* |demon plan this all along. It have sex with him and he die, the demon win.
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& E* x ~4 l* G" c. B; U2 D: a10. Your idea…
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sorry for my English, I am not English speaker.1 }) x- d# K9 \1 E6 F
' X2 R6 W$ t. v: q! `If any of you interested in my story idea and want to write it
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