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這裡做小抄本記下一個構思，防止遺忘。- a8 Q* O9 Q& T5 \" L- N# _
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這是由舞會的想到的寒蟬改版。但人物關係全都變了。包含M2F，F2M，SM，亂倫，百合等雜燴。
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姐弟，同高，身材大體相當，關係親密。父親為高級科研人員，常年在研究室，家庭富裕。姐姐大美女，但弟弟一直愛慕姐姐，姐姐也知道，但毕竟是姐弟，更多是亲情上的包容。姐姐高中毕业时期被第一任有钱帅气男友甜言蜜语骗走了第一次，男友炫耀终于上了校花并出国，姐姐无比伤心。大学终于交往一普通不富裕但真诚的男友。弟弟聰明，有靈性，從小善於做膠質面具（舉例兒時姐姐生日做的鬼臉面具嚇壞所有人）中間穿插姐姐和大学男友談情，弟弟暗中偷聽，内心暗暗心恨，发誓姐姐你是属于我的。* b/ g2 y& ]! s! x
一日，姐弟談話，討論到姐姐男友，弟說现在男友也只是喜歡姐姐的面貌，身體，和以前那个混蛋一样。姐姐認為他們是真心相愛。弟弟說我會證明給你看。接下來弟弟盜用父親研究成果，結合自己的技術，廢寢忘食研製。終於告訴姐姐可以製作一個仿真人皮，和姐姐打賭他來扮演姐姐，姐姐則扮做弟弟（過程取模，製作等等，而且有父親研究纳米传感技术成果，可以感官完全模擬，中間姐姐變成弟弟，話兒挺起，但未發生關係），男友不會有任何察覺并共處，已證明只是愛姐姐的容貌和身體。。而後二人交换身份，弟弟完美扮演一個性感的姐姐和男友交往，并引诱男友上床，男友未覺任何異樣，并利用男友的真心爱来報復男友，玩起SM女王，男友被调教變成M。（中间插有姐姐以弟弟身份被同班女生表白并半推半就下被女生献身。）。弟弟给姐姐看了男友被SM的情形和床上的录像，姐姐大哭傷心，弟弟安慰，傾訴愛意，说真心爱姐姐只有自己。姐姐拒絕亂倫，弟弟解釋說自己會以女身，不算亂倫，自己這幾天也喜歡上扮演姐姐，和作為一個女人的感覺，愿意做妹妹，只要能爱着姐姐。通过人皮让姐姐绕过乱伦的心理谴责，幫姐姐脫掉人皮，二人百合（或弟弟以女體和姐姐男體發生關係？雙方只摘掉面具？）。二人不分開。後面發展？沒想到。继续交换？後續未知。
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哎，貌似又偏重邪惡了。3 I, E, J1 n' e4 d( G
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還有一個類美人魚短篇。但我絕不承認是美人魚系列。和最近第一人稱寫法同，“變”的能力在對方手上。（這算第二人稱嗎？我語文不好。）似乎這樣寫法很有诱惑感？至少我感觉，看最近几篇都是。: w1 }, H3 i% z& D; e8 r
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我回到故鄉小城市，并不是榮歸故里。我是避難回來。我是某黑社會組織的一個普通幹事，我為了發達，巧設計畫，偷出并倒賣了組織的假鈔電板給另一組織。而且做了我爲了保護電板死掉的假象。打撈一筆，現在時享受快樂人生的時候了。（以上交代式速度寫過）
; t+ w1 Q0 `* v8 [# n" y. @# {在這個小城里碰到了以前學校的校花，校花是如此風情萬種，想到自己還是單身，但今時不同往日，我現在很有錢！追求校花。二人開始交往，當夜上床，我把我的秘密勸說了出來，並說我的就是你的。校花轉為男聲，大驚，卻立馬失去知覺。+ ]% s' o" V- }, E9 X' T- \) [3 f
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一室內，校花脫下面具，脫下全身人皮。是一男子。男子以女聲電話說目標搞定，匯另一半錢。一旁的電腦屏幕上，是我詳細的資料。（這真的不是美人魚，只是個短篇）
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以上優先短篇。寫不寫看心情和時間允許。
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! Q( A. W8 M/ ~8 t1 W* c順帶給出一老外創意。
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This story is a dark one, I think it suitable to post on Halloween, anyway
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I was thinking, maybe those of us with good story writing( Y/ L" W* B3 g9 s3 m; J
skills amongst us, could flesh my idea into full bodysuit story.
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Story idea:4 v2 `% M# N/ T9 L. G
- \$ K* T' D/ o GThere is an evil demon among us, it is a male demon blending in
( r, N/ ?* u1 a* B% thuman society for hundreds year. It feed by draining life force from
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woman. It can't transform itself into a woman directly but it can
2 E% T- |& p: l$ x9 v+ sshift its body to simulate woman shape body, it only need a skin to
5 {' ~5 a4 m3 _# S- S9 t1 x3 A- [) ccover its hellish and ugly body.
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% R. n: |$ s8 C; S3 iIt hypnotize a woman and have sex with her, when it climax it4 v5 \2 J8 x$ g5 l$ H
ejaculate its demon semen into a woman's body, the semen is very hot
) v7 [/ ~" M, i5 [and acid it melt a woman's body both muscle,organ fat and bones from4 K' T! [; F) p: a+ Z
inside so a woman die terribly living only the skin and hair of a
9 g; g! w6 p4 f) i, hwoman. Then it put on the skin of an ill fate woman and disguise as+ ]2 j' L: t5 H0 H
its victim, shifting its body part underneath dead woman's skin such9 K* C2 [& v j3 Q6 j" [
as reduce height, weight, change eye color from blood red to nomal
/ p9 k0 `+ }4 I* n4 H1 e. i! H" uhuman eye, its canine teeth fall out and grow a new set of human white
2 n: d' B7 f3 m5 Zteeth, forming breasts, narrow waist, wide hip, change its voice so it# V% D( V& S9 n
look exactly like a woman before she die. It like to study a woman. ^& O) ^$ H2 L% h
before it impersonate her,learn how she talk, walk and when its
* s3 k& O# o# \; Rdisguise as her it even smell and taste like her, so nobody even her
5 I) [( X- V7 V/ {0 klover can't tell the difference. So its easy target was men that have
% Y+ N% L7 v1 Q" h$ hgirlfriend or wife.
. Y7 a( h$ X+ @/ \7 Z. r- I# OIt like to collect women skin and took skins back to its lair, it can9 a. @7 s8 \6 P
have sex with a woman while its disguise as another woman by pull its
% o3 x3 z/ O2 E M, cpenis out of the skin vagina, melt her and have another skin suit
0 o" c4 I2 T7 z, ~2 Gwhile didn't came out of first suit.
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' G: c3 H9 p$ R3 |% v6 y# vThen it hunt for a man life force, it can produce a pheromone to9 K3 u6 \) c$ o; b, ~) B
attract men. It have sex with unsuspected man once a man came it) A. `: o, s: @, t; k1 a2 [5 y
collect a man semen to produce acid semen in the future and also drain+ ^9 {- h; }8 c
its victim life force energy so he die. It cause police report of q# P; r3 }, e; `' f
mystery missing girls and dead men body found everyday, autopsy reveal
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J9 Q8 Q3 S$ F- ~The story should told through perspective of our hero, the demon
0 L3 y2 Z6 g% Qhunter. He have a very haunting experience when he was young. One day
/ {' K: n, |6 Che came from school early and heard the sound of moaning from his
: z2 `8 D& A6 V3 }9 Y$ I$ Hparent bedroom, he look through door knob to saw that his father was
( f* k3 Q# E# r1 K! |having sex with his mother but when they both climax he saw horror
+ }+ ~3 D9 _: ^ Oscene of his life, he heard very loud roar came out from his mother
; V4 r8 ^3 @+ v- f0 U) G# Hlip somewhat like a lion but it more deeper that he never heard it
y7 G d0 ?! i( H' w& b/ Rbefore. He saw that his father also realize this from horror in his
. z) _% P+ l; C2 X- Heye and suddenly there a light from his father going through his; N4 G0 ?% Q' p4 |. U* j& E
mother, his father body then became very thin and pale like skeleton.
. i, g; R$ x: `1 w: B' w, m- i, jHis mother then laugh evilly and clime off and getting dress, when she5 @3 L4 t7 M* Z- q& i
saw him she look at him lustfully and say "You are too young, but we
; {1 e& D3 T* zwill meet again!" he never saw his mother look at him like that. She
8 s) L1 ]# c' ?0 a* Tgrin lick her lip fondle her breasts and walk off the house, he really$ ~4 _. g& ]; i' Q X
feel scare and arouse but then he realized that his father is in, R0 _8 d& l) v$ u4 t
trouble he run too see his father, he was dying and told him before he
" F) s( c% R- \" zdie to locate an important book in basement. After the funeral he goes3 c3 q! a0 N) A. L( {' o$ N' h% O, y# {
to look for it and saw that it was an ancient book about the male
( P( D; D# Y; c! |* M( Jdemon that drains life force from human male by disguise as a woman,
. a! Q, R% a) ~$ e/ ~: Ghe knew that in that day he didn't saw his mother but the demon
* p+ {8 z' z6 J8 b: ddisguise as her, he loss both of his parent and also learned that his
) m. ^5 Q$ M& g6 Afamily was the demon hunter family passing the duty from father to son
5 v h& A" u/ k1 }; h4 i+ Hsince his great great grandfather but they fail to hunt this demon
3 C" S3 J- s* n$ {4 @& s' ]2 Ybecause it is very smart and also have hypnotize power, for hundreds
/ H* q0 R+ r- W0 J6 Kyear it know art of feminine seduction.% H# j7 \: ~: B6 r$ f" Q5 K
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So now many years pass he and his younger sister living with his
) w: A% @& _/ l Y6 `% [0 waunt(younger sister of mom) he study in university and he vows3 |" t2 E' u* E. Y( p
revenge for his parent by hunting this demon down from evidence such4 h) H+ I! V( @! h4 j% y
as unidentified dead body of naked men some shed skin of women like in
7 }+ n; V0 u f) ?3 L0 D9 _mystery stories. He know that the demon can't living in sunlight it
) _* j# u9 j1 |* z( M# T* {# M2 uwill die shortly so it use women skin to cover its own body, but how
& e3 e; D2 ]7 Q pcan he locate the demon it can be anybody(any female). The demon also* ]& i( H$ s2 g6 T
know that the demon hunter's life force is greater than ordinary0 S n0 |2 W* r% m9 f5 {( t0 p1 b
human, if it drain the demon hunter's life force it will be much1 v6 X8 g7 { R* s
stronger. It had drained his father so it was more stronger in pass 10# Z9 L8 y& y1 }" [2 N5 Z Y
years but now it feel that its power was diminishing so it also
% q5 [! r; E& k- X* Qlooking and hunt for him for more power.
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. Z+ U! ?8 _6 M6 gSo he have to hunt this demon while also have to protect his0 J& U# P) Z4 r1 ]# C# k
sister and his aunt that is his only relative left and he also have to3 Z$ f0 x- m6 S# m; u
protect his beloved beautiful girlfriend from the demon.* X; h# T4 O! i3 I) d Y+ L
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Who will be the hunter who will be prey. This is the idea of this story7 \* x( j4 W6 h5 E
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2 q# Y3 {5 A a" k' s7 M' AI think this is horror/mystery story.
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& r$ i2 |8 S( E. m- h( [I see that the demon have more advantages than him so I think the book
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original body) to kill the demon such as silver bullet or holy water
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The demon can't be detect easily it can became anyone and very' F; j- }) Y! z% [& D
dangerous, what if he have six sense or hi-tech tool such as demon# S7 H, l+ r! F9 Q' b2 ]/ n1 S
detector or something .....(your idea) so it can detect who is the
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$ I7 v( g1 H+ f: K1. He track down the demon to its liar and kill it successfully.2 k3 L6 r& i( c3 M1 `) _: r5 H( w4 x- V
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2. He track down the demon to its liar but it escaped (sequel?)" c6 B" D1 U8 W" d$ i! O. n
+ B1 a0 M' e1 u+ {" J: l$ N( p3. He have been tricked the demon disguise as his girlfriend (his- e# P0 G1 |. ]( e v# {2 f" W
girlfriend had die already to became a suit) and have sex with him and% m0 \0 G) a: r1 ]& ^
he die, the demon win.5 h0 i$ h. {1 n1 j' N9 \
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4. The demon disguise as his girlfriend but he know and kill it.
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5. The demon disguise as his sister? Did he can kill it or fail?
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5 |6 D$ r) q4 v9 F$ A6. The demon disguise as his aunt? Did he can kill it or fail?
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9 E5 z0 w5 k7 c7 y7. The demon hypnotize his sister to have sex with him, he think that7 {& K" G7 v* H
she was the demon so he kill her while the demon is disguising as his9 O) H; C- c+ z5 |% T/ H
girlfriend!. After the funeral he was very sad, it pretend to% {4 B7 `2 F& j; i8 V/ w" g
comfort him and have sex with him so he die, the demon win.
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8. His mother came back to him she say that his father hate her and* u. E2 J$ ^4 ^) Z7 ^4 ~
they divorce, she was living far away across country and she came to4 m) h* w( x( F R
look for forgiveness from him and say that his father hate her even( ^/ e6 }7 v3 p2 }
before he die he make up all story about the demon. But he already
+ y) i; q) D# }! N. V( Kseen horror in the past before his father die, his mother is saying
8 `* ~# F' f6 S- y: ?% b" xthe truth or she was the demon in disguise?
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the woman that he date and falling in love isn't what she seem, the
; W0 `/ N, c6 Ndemon plan this all along. It have sex with him and he die, the demon win.6 D6 ?8 r, p3 h2 r. O& X) K5 h
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10. Your idea…
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) ^( @$ W, j# C, ]/ i: Bsorry for my English, I am not English speaker.7 h8 _; z4 E* S" A, ]
) E$ m) q/ _2 z. J- B& tIf any of you interested in my story idea and want to write it/ \$ x+ i4 y* z7 C6 b0 J5 V4 h1 T
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